Multipelt

[multipelt]

Your Name: Multipelt
Roleplaying Experience: Catster but everyone got banned because we weren't allowed to roleplay
Your Opinion: Maybe more active cats

character:Multipelt

Name: Multipelt

Gender: Male
Age: 13 moons


Clan: Thunderclan

Rank: Warrior

Description: Eyes:Green pelt:White black and orange.: normal claws
Regular size


Personality: Loner but loyal

Summary sad that does not have had a mate but will die for his clan if ever needed.Has had a rough past.Once had a mate who then traded on him.
History: Once in bloodclan but refused to kill cats for no reason betrayed by own mate at 9 moons and ran to thunderclan

Family: Not that he can remember

Mate: None

Roleplaying Sample: *Runs through the forest hoping to find someone,or something*

Code Word: Warrior cats

[Venomstrike]

All right, in short, there's a lot of problems here. Allow me to begin.

First off, the name. Multipelt isn't exactly a warrior name. Try to use a more descriptive one.

Your Description needs to be at least 100 words long.
Your Personality needs to be at least 100 words long; yours isn't even a complete sentence.

The summary is a one sentence description of your cat. It includes pelt color, gender, and eye color.

Your history needs to be at least 150 words long.
Your roleplaying sample needs to be at least 100 words long.

The roleplaying sample and history need to be in 3rd person and in story format. Try going to the Warriors School to learn more about roleplaying. =]