Post by Cricketfoot on Aug 19, 2009 20:06:02 GMT -6
A small tugging pulled at her paws, also tugging at the fear that lingered in the back of her mind. The water swirled around, waking memories that had rested until now. Memories of drowning and rapids pulling her along a merciless river, of paws thrashing against the water, unable to breathe and there seemed to be no escape. Images of her struggling through the deep dark waters swam before her eyes, her small body twisting and turning in feeble attempts to pull herself to the surface. Those memories came out to play in her nightmares, dancing in and out of sight, making it hard to sleep. Those memories that she never wished to relive. Heartbeats became more and more rapid. It beat against her chest as she stared down her legs, long waves rippled across her belly fur.
Most RiverClan cats would’ve just plodded right on through the small river that cut off their camp from the mainland. Cricketfoot on the other paw was different. A lingering fear of the water gripped this young she-cat every time she came back from a patrol or from hunting, whenever she left camp or came back, she would have to cross the water. It was ever since she nearly drowned in the river. The event had scarred her for life. Many cats in her clan thought she was barely a RiverClan cat for her fear of the river and swimming. She couldn’t even fish properly with this problem, making her nearly useless in hunting. Unless she was lucky enough to find something on land to chase and she even messed that up with her clumsy paws.
Usually, Cricketfoot tried to be fearless, crossing the shallowest part of the river, normally reaching to just above her paws. Even it just at her paws was uncomfortable for the warrior, making her shiver every time she placed a paw and it caused a splash. She never wanted to let herself get wet about over stomach. Though, with the melt of the snow, the river swelled with the extra water and the shallowest part now reached up to her belly. It tickled the skin underneath the dusty brown fur, making her shudder slightly. Her whole body coursed in a shiver, the shaking reaching down to her paws, almost making her fall.
Surging forward, Cricketfoot carried on through the water. She placed her paws cautiously on the slippery stones that were underpaw. She wanted to make it back to land as fast as she could. After the patrol, all Cricketfoot wanted to do was get back to the Warrior’s Den and sleep, dry and warm.
Most RiverClan cats would’ve just plodded right on through the small river that cut off their camp from the mainland. Cricketfoot on the other paw was different. A lingering fear of the water gripped this young she-cat every time she came back from a patrol or from hunting, whenever she left camp or came back, she would have to cross the water. It was ever since she nearly drowned in the river. The event had scarred her for life. Many cats in her clan thought she was barely a RiverClan cat for her fear of the river and swimming. She couldn’t even fish properly with this problem, making her nearly useless in hunting. Unless she was lucky enough to find something on land to chase and she even messed that up with her clumsy paws.
Usually, Cricketfoot tried to be fearless, crossing the shallowest part of the river, normally reaching to just above her paws. Even it just at her paws was uncomfortable for the warrior, making her shiver every time she placed a paw and it caused a splash. She never wanted to let herself get wet about over stomach. Though, with the melt of the snow, the river swelled with the extra water and the shallowest part now reached up to her belly. It tickled the skin underneath the dusty brown fur, making her shudder slightly. Her whole body coursed in a shiver, the shaking reaching down to her paws, almost making her fall.
Surging forward, Cricketfoot carried on through the water. She placed her paws cautiously on the slippery stones that were underpaw. She wanted to make it back to land as fast as she could. After the patrol, all Cricketfoot wanted to do was get back to the Warrior’s Den and sleep, dry and warm.
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Players: Cricketfoot
Word Count: 437